Where no eyes can peek, where only your heart speaks..
There, where in it tells you what it wants..
There, where it shares how it feels..
Dances when it sees you happy,
Gets upsets when it sees your fear,
Tears apart when you shed your tears..
Opens up to those who seem real...
Lasting a lifetime, it sees so much,
With every little fall, it learns so much..
How many stories does it have to be a part of,
Until it reaches a love story, which it is meant for?
16 comments:
Lovely... Simple and yet so deep..
@LeoPaw Thankyou :)
hey ayesha..this is such a lovely poetry..ur simple words make it easy to understand..i hv nominatd u for an award..https://zradar.wordpress.com/2011/12/11/yipeee-i-am-recognised/
@zradar thankyou for reading and also for the nomination :)
simple and lovely .. loved ur way of poetry ..
That was so neat....Very nicely written :)
sweet n crisp.. like ur expression :-)
@☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ thankyou :)
@Shilpi Dutta thankyou for the read :)
@Ankur Anand thankyou
lovely poetry..goes straight to the heart..^__^
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Thankyou for the read Bulbulvish :) I'm glad it touched your heart
Ur poetry is a parah or two but dey speak millions!!
Whoa I'm glad you feel this way :D
Message is beautifully conveyed with a lot of simplicity...
@Amruta Marwah
thankyou :D
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